Inkitt
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Rose and black

"I loved this story great writing "

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Good story

"Very good story line and I like the characters. Jason did need a swift kick in the butt a few times and it was sad when a character was lost. There were a few grammatical issues but I didn't think they really detracted from the book overall. "

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A good book

"Good book I really love it. "

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Black

"This was an amazing story 💗💗💗🥰"

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Black

"I loved it!! ❤❤❤❤"

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Black

"Wonderful book. Just Wonderful!!! Great story line and writing style ☺️☺️☺️"

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Black

"Rly luv the book"

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Love this story

"Thank you, good story "

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Black

"This was a good story! I’m happy Jason came to his senses. On another note...please edit! A lot of mistakes made grammatically. Also...when she mentioned she never had oral sex, that wasn’t accurate because he gave her oral sex before when Karl interrupted, because of the fire at the office. Also the chapter about her date with Ricky in the restaurant, Jason’s POV was repetitive. Otherwise, it was a good story 👍🏼"

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Sweet one

"After finishing the whole story my heart is still aching for Chris. Loved it💙"

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Loved the story

"Thank you for the story "

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G.B

"Nice plot. Hope you improve your grammar and spellings. But don't give up writing. Your style is good. "

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Stacy

"I can’t put the book down!! The only thing is the broken English but understandable given it’s not her first language. "

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Jason black

"It's a good book"

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Beautiful story🥰

"Like your style of writing and the flow was good too. Looking for more of your works"

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Black

"Loved the book alot. Great plot. Couldn't put it down. Great storyline from the beginning to the end. Glad I uploaded this book."

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Good

"Thus a gud book,and l love it"

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Black

"Great book couldn’t stop reading it "

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🔥🔥🔥🔥😂

"Amazing 🔥🔥🔥"

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Black

"The story is honest and lovely. The main lead Jason is handsome and has his own unique character. While the female lead is a bit doubtful about herself, she is still beautiful inside out. I would recommend this book to read ❤️😍"

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