What is your opinion?
Its ok
"Alls fair in love n war"
Suspense!
"Holy cow, this is a serious action thriller! I was in the character's shoes the whole time. Brilliant."
Average
"To begin with i enjoyed your writing style and i didn't notice too many grammar errors that made it unreadable. Explanation of scenes and character development seems alright not amazing but it held its weight. But as for most action writers, romance is not their strong suit and tends to come off cheesy. if they force it into the story. I am not a huge fan of gi-joe or resident evil but from what i took out of it, seemed like a fun concept that you obviously put time and effort into and should be applauded for. Good stepping stone for future work.. keep writing and things will get easier. Not a bad story but not a good one. 3/ 5 stars"
Unnecessary romance crap killed it.
"Fine but really unnecessary in a story like this. Slowed it down and bored me to tears. I liked the crossover idea and might have rated it higher if not for that. Also, Beretta was misspelled. That's really all I have to say."
