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Delta's Deceipt (Shadow Pack#4)

"Short story but great! I love this one!"

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Delta's deceit

"Good book.... thanks 👍 Can be improved...☺️ Your story imagination is good..."

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Deltas deceit [shadow pack#4]

"Great series thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Delta's Deceit

"I do hope you plan to rewrite these stories and fix the grammar issues because the stories would are a good read and have good plots."

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Delta's Deceit by Nikki Larousse

"Although it's a bit short, I totally love the story. ❤️❤️❤️ Keep writing more of this genre. I'm rooting for you."

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Love the story

"Love it. Well written plot"

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Good

"The story is compelling. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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I loved it

"I actually liked everything about this story, but it would have been better if it was explained a little bit more by it I mean her relation to Cyprus her father’s heritage etc, anyway overall this story is leng ."

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Delta deceit

"Love it 😍 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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J happy

"Nails odor Osgood odor kickoff"

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Short and cute

"Short and cute "

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Delta'd Deceit

"This story seems like it's too short. The conclusion is surprising. I would have expected the author to discuss more about their story..."

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