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"I just finished reading your story and I should say I was quite interested at first and through most of it. I very much liked your writing style and I should say it is one I do prefer reading. It could clearly reflect a mirror in my head although I would have liked to know how Nora looks like in your head. The thing that stroke in the plot was its smooth understand although you kept it hanging until the end, although it could have been better. You had made some grammatical mistake here and there but I don't think I caught many. Overall I enjoyed it and I am being completely honest. I don't do reviews and am no expert, but I appreciated your story enough to take time and write this. Thank you"

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"Good story with very cool monsters. But why do you say they are talking in Latin when they are talking in Serbo-Croatian? And what is the sacrifice for? Also, how do they kill their victim? Inquiring minds want to know."

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