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"Surprised by the points of view in this one! Young, raw, authentic characters makes for an interesting read. I hope you do update this story here. I will follow this 👌 "
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"I have Ben lost in this book the entire time. So many things left unanswered. Like the parents being gone all the time and just sending money. What do they do? Damien owning a business then getting the money from his dad. Mark the brother doesn’t reappear in the story and why is he so fidgety. Who started Damien on his lifestyle. The mother of Damien attitude was wild and she was only mentioned once. The errors of punctuation, spelling, and grammar is too much. Get an editor. "
