What is your opinion?
Kasun'd kisses
"It was good read.... lovely and the story line was good👍 But maybe in some places it can be explained in more detail....to avoid readers confusion."
Kaduna kisses[shadow pack #1]
"That was great thank you for sharing your story with me "
Kasun's Kisses
"Grammar needs A LOT of work as it is apparent that English is not your primary language but overall it was a good story. A little short on background information but a nice short read. Will look forward to reading more of the series."
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"This is great. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."
Kansu kisses
"Love it 😍 ❤️❤️❤️😉"
Kasun Kisses.
" Good read and easy to follow there were some words left out with and grammar error. But other than that I enjoyed the book"
Uyobh
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Kasun's Kisses
"I applaud the author for coming up with this storyline. I would have preferred the plot to be more explosive. Anyway, a big hand to the author..."
Kasun's Kisses
"I liked the story. Although sometimes it was hard to remember in who's pov I was reading. There was a mix between Caleb and Marina point of views. And when they spoke in the mind link there was no differentiation between it and a normal conversation. You should have gone into more detail about Marina adjusting to her wolf form, the pack giving her a hard time for being a non member. The distrust Marina had from Caleb. And I felt that you just left Marina's grandfather death in the middle. He was the only family she had after all. The least you could do was let her mourn his death. You could have delved more into Marina and Caleb's past. That would have made more interesting. And longer too! "
Short and cute
"Short but cute"
Nice story
"Nice story, lots of plots."
Umm.
"The plot line would be really good, but it is rushed and some parts are confusing and unnecessary. For example, the first chapter and part of the second. You included things in the first chapter that you never wrote about again. It makes me confused to why you included them. This is just my opinion, but if I were you, I would go through and I would elaborate. Just to make the book seem less rushed. "
nice
"good read.."
