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Cruel Max

"Loved'it 🤗😘"

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Amazing

"It was an amazing Rollercoaster of emotions the way that it made me feel what she was feeling was just absolutely fantastic and I love the happy ending."

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Cruel max

"Great! Story never dragged "

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Cruel Max

"Great story, though she went through hell, she got her happily ever"

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Cruel Max

"Good read. Really well written with well developed characters. Max and Megan had a rocky start, but was glad to see that they found each other and worked thru all of the hardships to find solace "

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Cruel Max

"Wow such a good book the characters went through Hell and Back but still stood strong excellent plot strong characters love the twist and turns.."

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Cruel Max

"Originally I started to read this story of Max and Megan thinking, “I’ll just start with a few chapters”. Before I know it I have reached the end of this delightful, adventurous story! Thank You ☺️ "

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Enjoyabke

"This novel is well written and interesting. The main character goes into awful situations which are forced on her, however, because of her, changes are made. Recommend!"

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What a ride!!!

"This story was pretty good but will take your emotions in all directions particularly with the first half of the book. The two main characters will frustrate you but it eventually works out in the end. The book is a page turner, well done!"

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Cruel Max

"Love this story so much! Great story line and plot. Great characters and personalities. Some words were misplaced at times but, overall this book is amazing. Good job! Excited to read more of your work."

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Cruel Max

"I really enjoyed read this book. I’m so happy for them. Can’t wait to read about Jackson"

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Cruel Max

"I enjoyed the storyline. It was entertaining and engaging, but there were somethings that were just kind of glazed over or weren't really finalized and smoothed out. There needs to be more backstory to Dalia. Who is she and how did she get away with so much destruction? She started the fire that killed Sarah before she had the support of Alpha John, so who assisted her with this initial fire? I think the sudden introduction of a witch in this story (working with Alpha John and distorting reality) throw me for a loop because there was no prior mention of there being other supernatural beings in this story. What is Megan's power and where did it come from? I get that Megan is a descendent of the Moon Goddess, but why do Megan's parents seem to be completely oblivious to their daughters abilities? You would think that they would be more protective of something so precious, but they all but through her out of the house when Max arrived. What gives? Again, the story was easy to read and follow along, but there were a lot of things that were left unresolved "for lack of a better word.""

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Cruel Max

"This was a very good story 💗💗💗💗"

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Trouble

"Good story so far "

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Okay.

"So many misspelled words it will drive you crazy. Overall, it's a good book to read, but author needs to go back and edit really bad."

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Not so cruel Max

"Overall I really enjoyed this story. I loved the story line and the characters. I sometimes felt there needed to be a little more balance or explanation for certain things. But I wouldn't have stopped reading because of any of these opinions. I honestly can't wait to read Jackson. "

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Love this

"I love this story it went from them hate one another to them just being a happy family I can’t wait to see what there further hold out for them "

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Cruel Max

"I love this story. They have been through so much but they have come out of everything so well. I’m really looking forward to reading the next chapters. "

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Fhghch

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Cruel Max

"I love the plot of the story. I kept trying to figure out why all this bad stuff kept happening. They just can't catch a break. "

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