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"Interesting storyline. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar."

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Good

"Awesome! I love your writing style, I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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Torn between two fools

"I am in tears!! A beautiful and loving story! "

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Two mates

"Great story l love it"

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Catching

"I love that she ends up happy and not caught like a flea between two nails"

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Absolutely loved it!

"Once again this author has made a beautiful story that captures your heart. So sweet, sexy and sad. Wonderfully writen. "

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Hmm I like it so far

"I like the story but wish the chapters were longer. "

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Not the best 3p

"So great story . But I couldn't understand that if it is 3p story why adam get the short stick in all? Why these two didn't turn her to wolf? If she was mad at the fact she had to choose between the two why she althe time put liam first? The fact she got mad when she was pregnant was all because of the both guy, did she forget that? Why not having more children. (Maybe because of balance?) To much sad moment it was all crying . It is better put the tag on for tragedy more. I just saw fight and no romance . "

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