Amusing and Innovative.

"This is very hard to review because of just how meta it is. First off, props for the idea. It makes for a smile and is so off the wall I had no idea what was happening at first. It also got genuinely amusing in the last half. About the first 1/4 was a tad difficult and if there were jokes I was missing them because of how confused I was before I cottoned on. I would say that maybe you could be a tad more descriptive, but that will be very difficult in this tale as the voice of the beta in particular would not be described or pleasing to read, merely purely functionary. Similarly this tale seemed to rely on it's fast pacing which worked very well and which would be bogged down by more description. For what this is and what it is trying to be it is very good, almost review proof because of the concept, but still good."