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Mystery!

"This was definitely an entertaining read. There are some parts that seem to go on a bit too long for me to keep my attention, BUT I really REALLY enjoy the mystery and the characterization so far. Also, the details are very nice. This is definitely a story I'll want to keep up with because the mystery is driving me crazy. Well done. "

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Going great!

"Thatt was an ab-so-lute-ly amazingg start! Those exaggerated thoughts of the guy were just hilarious. It's hard for someone to get me hooked with the very first chapter and here you go author, Goodjob! Although, you need to just check on a little bit of punctuation errors here and there buh otherwise going great! Please update soon! 🤩"

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