What is your opinion?
Lana
"I absolutely love the premise to this story. I tend to read about a book a night, & some books just feel right. This is one of those books. The descriptions of the world & people inhabiting are are wonderful. The dialogue can get a bit stilted, but the story pulls you forward inexorably. Obviously this is a book in progress, but even so I can tell once the author finishes it, it will be a page turned worthy of publication. I can’t wait for more chapters to be added! If I had the skill to write like this, I might try the dialogue out on a friend to see what changes could be made o make it flow better. Also, the main character is transitioning, seemingly into two beings, & it’d be nice to hear more inner dialogue to understand from Sunny’s perspective when that transpired & how she feels about it before we hear her referring to herself in the second person. This author has an amazing imagination, & she manages to capture her vision in her words. This is a must read."
Greatest book
"This is a great book "
I like it
"I love this book I hope you have plans to write more"
enthralling!
"The story totally captures the reader's attention from the first chapter, you are very descriptive which I totally love and makes me want to read more of it!!"
Lana
"I am excited to see what happens next .hopefully she can make it through the maze..like it so far."
