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Tangled

"I’m a 73 yr older woman and straight but this was such a sensuous story I was happy when they finally got together I have bi children and grandchildren so love is love "

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Feedback

"Most of the story is very nice Engaging and sensual "

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Lovers from the start

"Love the story up to chapter 30. The love told between Lee and David was great and showed a bond between them that could not be broken. Then Jack and Danny were both brought into the story making it for a very interesting storyline. However the writer left us wondering what is going to happen next. Please continue from where you left off. Great writing by the author. ⭐️💕😉🥰🫶🏼😊⭐️"

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Tangled love

"I personally love the characters developing attraction subconsciously and physically. Your grammar is impeccable. Thank you for the amazing book. "

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RJ Raine

"Such a sad story. I love the characters and I hope Lee can make peace with his inner demons before it's too late."

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Tangled love

"I like the way the author is telling this story, the suspense about why Lee can be with David, why they can't ve together. Please keep writing this story. Or is somewhere else where you finish the story. This is the second time I found it and realized it is not finished yet. I hope you can finish it. Thank you. "

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Great

"I really loved your story, especially because you've focused on the LGBTQ+ community and I really loved your characters. However, I did see several errors in punctuation and grammar which made the story a little difficult to read. Overall, good job."

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