apsararodrigo

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A good read

I was fascinated by your writing style and the fact that you have brought out such an engaging novel.

There were, however, a few minor grammar mistakes, which can be gotten rid of by editing.

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Great

The novel had a very engaging plot. Keep up the good work. Aside from a few punctuation errors this really does seem like a masterpeice

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Ambitious

I really liked the plot of your novel. I am a huge fan of historical romances myself and I was so excited to read yours.

There are, however, a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that could be improved through editing. You also have been mistaken with tenses.

Overall, your novel seems off to a great start.

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Good job

I am usually not a fan of fantasy, but this novel was both engaging and entertaining.

Your plot flows smoothly with only a few minor errors and your character development is amazing. Keep it up.

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Great storyth

The novel was a really great book, with only a few errors. Keep it up.

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Incredible

This is the first time I have read a book of poetry and I was pleasantly surprised. The poems were beautiful and emotional. Keep it up.

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Interesting

I really loved the idea of the story and it seems like you have a really good plot. Aside from a few grammar mistakes, it seems like the perfect read.

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Good job

The novel makes a very interesting read. There are a few minor grammar mistakes, yet overall, it is a good read

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An interesting read

This novel definitely has an interesting plot that traps the reader's attention. We are left wondering about Valerie's mystery illness. I really like your descriptions and imagery. Your use of rhetorical questions also captivates the mind of the reader. Well done!
However, there are some errors in grammar which you need to look out for.
Overall, you have a very interesting book and I can't wait to read more.

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A great read

Your writing was amazing with an engaging plot and fascinating characters. There were however a few concerns regarding grammar and style.
In short, it is a great piece of literature and I cannot wait to read more of your works.

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