apsararodrigo

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Good job

The novel makes a very interesting read. There are a few minor grammar mistakes, yet overall, it is a good read

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An interesting read

This novel definitely has an interesting plot that traps the reader's attention. We are left wondering about Valerie's mystery illness. I really like your descriptions and imagery. Your use of rhetorical questions also captivates the mind of the reader. Well done!
However, there are some errors in grammar which you need to look out for.
Overall, you have a very interesting book and I can't wait to read more.

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A great read

Your writing was amazing with an engaging plot and fascinating characters. There were however a few concerns regarding grammar and style.
In short, it is a great piece of literature and I cannot wait to read more of your works.

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