Inkitt
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Forbidden love

"You're an amazng writer, the plot is really interesting, i can't wait to read more chapters"

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🖤🖤

"Hey it’s actually really good and the forbidden love just hits so hard 100% recommend it ❤️"

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Wow...

"This is brilliant. The plot, the forbidden love (one of my favourite tropes), the way you describe the beating of the wings. Your narrative voice is *chef's kiss* perfection. You are one damn amazing writer."

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Nice work

"Hi from a follower and another underage author. I love ur book. The only reason I rated it 4 stars is cause so far the plot is a little basic: person falls in love with someone they can't love. However, I am curious to see how you twist the story to make it unike. I love ur writing style. The Punctuation need a little work, but overall u have written a fantastic book."

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