Tragically Beautiful

"I've first read your story on fanfiction.net, and I'm glad to see it here. You're story is tragically beautiful, and the romantic inside of me prefers your other version of the epilogue. I absolutely adore your story and I salute you for a job well done!"

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"I really liked your (Two Sparrows In a Hurricane) story and I want to know whats going to happen in the upcoming chapters. I also want to know if you're working on any new stories and if so, what kind of story it’s going to be. And can you suggest another story similar to this one for me to read? I'm truly enjoying reading your stories!"

Promising story. Great start. Somewhat weak development. Unexpected ending.

"The score is mainly due to the surprising ending (at least I didn't expect it) and the interesting idea of ​​the "Adonnen". I think the story's development could be better, on more than one occasion I felt that it focused on irrelevant topics for the main plot or characters that seemed relevant were sent off without any kind of closure... And I would have liked to see a more natural or in-depth development of the relationship between Karina and Thranduil... But despite all that I ended up crying my eyes out... so, obviously, this love story has touched me."