What is your opinion?
Gitura Kihuria
"A well written story that could have developed further. It felt like it was starting to pick off when I realized I was on the last paragraph. You should consider expanding the short story to a book or novella perhaps. Overall, I enjoyed reading."
Mind games
"Florence that was a good read. I actually enjoyed it. By the time I finished, I felt par-amnesic myself, unable to conclude whether or not you were really haunted. I saw you in the piece more as a writer and it was hard to imagine you as a mathematics professor. Anyway I also noticed a typo in paragraph eight ---sometimes, if I stared too long --- thanks for sharing this. I am not into short stories but now you got me thinking about it..."
Goose bumps
"I have always enjoyed paranormal stories because I believe there is a world out there that we don't know a lot about. The story is well developed and it flows. However I wish it would dwell more on what the narrator felt and reacted to the events that were happening. The story also has a few grammatical flaws which I think the writer should have easily corrected if she had read and re-read the story. All in all I enjoyed reading the story. It was an easy read and has inspired me to try and write a paranormal story one of these days."
