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I Wish I Could Review
"I don't know how I feel about the first chapter starting off with his death. If you are going to start off with that, have flash backs of them and add more of her thoughts to show she's struggling mentally. Maybe even add more description, because I feel like you are mostly relying on dialogue. Just some things to keep in mind when you edit it. I like it otherwise."
I Wish I Could
"It's nice that it's updated everyother week or sooner, but there are some punctuation and grammar errors. I really can't say much until we get more along in the story."
