Musiclover13980

Crazyvill Hell of Broken Dreams

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Road Trip

First off, I'm sorry for the bad review. There just isn't much up yet so I can't really rate the story overall or the plot. I honestly want to see where this is going and I can't wait for an update.

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I Wish I Could

It's nice that it's updated everyother week or sooner, but there are some punctuation and grammar errors. I really can't say much until we get more along in the story.

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Maid for the Alpha

This is a great story so far, and I can't wait for more. The only problems are punctuation and grammar. The plot is coming along okay. Not many filler chapters so that way we could get more of them, but then again it's not like they went places. I'd suggest after this story is done to go back and fix the mistakes, or before you publish a chapter to re-read it a few times to make sure you have the major grammar errors fixed. I honestly can't wait for more. You'd also get more reads if you updates at least once or twice a month.

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