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Poetry

"I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now."

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Poetry

"I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now."

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Poetry

"I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now."

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  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Poetry

"I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Poetry

"I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation