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I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now.

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This is a beautiful story and my favorite part is the flowing script of it. It's almost poetic and beautiful, very well done. If you could turn this scene into a novel you would have a bestseller on your hands. Great job.

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Poetry

I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now.

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Poetry

I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now.

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Poetry

I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now.

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Poetry

I'm a sucker for good poetry, especially lovelorn stuff. This is interesting and your descriptive language really packs a punch. I enjoyed it but I also would have liked some more context. Even poems need a clear start, middle, and end. If you could clean this up, give it some definition and plot almost, you'd have something even better than the great poem you have now.

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