Inkitt
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Love

"I loved this story! I’m really sad that the sequel was never finished. The characters and plot were put together nicely. Great job author!"

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Two hearts as one

"The plot is thickening, i'm enjoying the progression of the story line. "

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Love the story line. Needs editing.

"Very captivating, but difficult to follow sometimes. Run-on sentences and grammar needs work. I'd be happy to help with the editing. Great story!"

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Good, could be improved.

"Hey there!! I know I promised a review so sorry it took me this long. Honestly by the name and the cover I had no idea I was going to read a werewolf story! Your book is great, but with how the paragraphs are compressed it is very hard to read, they are too packed if you know what I mean?? Like I noticed you had a whole chapter that consisted of one long paragraph which readers don't usually like. I myself used to have pretty packed paragraphs when I first started writing, but as you write more you improve. So just change that and a few grammatical errors you have and you'll have the readers hooked."

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