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"Your story is well written, and all the characters resemble the characters in the real thing, but you should be careful with your spelling, as 'quit', 'quiet' and 'quite' get mixed up a lot, and a lot of words are missing letters. Maybe you should use a spelling corrector like QuillBot, LanguageTool or Grammarly for your story. I do still like the story though, although I sometimes need to think twice about what I read. I like it, and I hope others agree with me."

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love

"hi im a big fan of harry potter amazing book"

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Harry potter and the prisoner of Azkaban

"They way you wright these books, it keeps me on my toes. I've never been into a book as much as I am with harry potter. I'm currently reading deathly hollows, but your books..... I keep putting that one down to read these. I like being able to hear and picture how harry's parents and their friends react to harry's life growing up. Its a horrible life, but gives you more perspective on why harry is the way he is. Makes me wish you'd Wright books after these, on how they stop this doomed future from happening."

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Harry Potter and the? (Prisoner of Azkaban)

"Excelent, love it "

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Love it!

"I love their reactions to learning everything! I can’t wait until Harry remembers everything about why he is there too!"

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Awesome

"Full of curiosity and adventures "

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Thank you

"First, I want to say English is not my first language so sry for any mistakes I might make. I really want to say thank you for finding a new place to post your story’s after they were taken down on ff. not many people would have gone through so much trouble. Also thanks for showing me this site I quite enjoy it. As always your story is great, the people are in character and have believable reactions and youre writing is fantastic. I am sure gramma is also good, but I cannot really judge that. I love reading the books story’s. Sadly, there are not many good ones and if there are, they are seldom finished. I am looking forward to the rest of this story and wish you the best of luck finishing it."

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Great Story

"I loved this story when you had it on fanfiction, and I love it here. These 'reading the books' stories are one of my favourite types of fanfiction and you do it brilliantly. The character's reactions to the various situations that they have read about is very consistent and believable throughout the story."

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Good Story

"The characters have very real like responses to the situations, and don't just read each book in a day. They also have bits that are unrelated to the books. I kind of want to see this author write a story of their years at Hogwarts."

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Nicest Holiday Surprise!

"Whoa! I've been wondering how would the Maurauders react to Harry's life and here we go! YOU ARE THE BEST! All the characters are consistent with their personalities shown in the book! I love how you compare Lily with Molly and it's definitely true for her being a mother! I wish Peter comes have a poke around after PoA though... That'll be... fun? Or even any time but after they find out he's the traitor! But then again that'll mess up the timeline... Are you going to maybe tell us a bit more about after the Battle of Hogwarts though? I'd be thrilled to have a peak in Harry life but I guess that should be another story? Anyways, please keep it up! I'm already impatient for the next chapters!!! (Spent two whole days reading the previous two books) Please please please keep updating till the very end! I really love your insights of the magical world! Thank you very much!"

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it was really awesome

"i really liked all of the parts.👏 it was totally perfect it could be recommended to all i think and the rating was a bit low bc really couldnt understand some parts but other than that it was totally worth my time reading it"

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jes

"I wish I could give this story zero stars. The parts which were written by JK Rowling are, of course, very good. The work that is supposedly original is all too typical for this sort: derivative, predictable and entirely unoriginal. This particular style of story is a Character-Read/Read-the-Books, and as with most stories of this type, in in violation of copyright law -- and incidentally, the TOS of this particular site (as it is with most other fanfiction sites). Hopefully, the administrators of this site will delete both this story and the other infringing story on this person's account."

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