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anticipation.

"I don't know the plot as now so I'm leaving it to one. Let's see what happens next."

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Good story

"Very good story"

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Erin lockwood

"Great story! I'm looking forward to her the rest"

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Etin

"So far good"

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Erin

"Fantastic book .LOVE IT."

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E4in Lockwood

"Enjoying the book so far ."

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What happened to Erin

"This writer is exceptionally gifted. She holds the reader's attention as questions about what happened to Eric pile up relentlessly. The horror that is reintroduced as a second girl disappears reminds us of Stephen King's greatest novel It. We loved this tale, and look forward to reading much more as it develops."

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Thrilled

"Knows how to keep the readers glued to the book. I couldn't keep down the book once I started. Wonderful writing skills. Hoping for more updates to come soon."

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Erin Lockwood

"A riveting and wonderful read. The writer's use of description is amazing. It adds to the plot in that it sustains the reader's interest. The suspense pulls the reader along and creates a unique story. "

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Can't Wait to Read More!

"I'm a big fan of murder mysteries or stories about missing people. I loved how this started! If a story can keep me guessing, I'll surely be in for the rest of the ride. Can't wait to read about all the nasty secrets they're hiding! In terms of writing, I think punctuation can be improved. Sometimes, a period is used instead of a comma, and it kinda disrupts the reading voice in my head. Other than that, loved the way you wrote this! You put just the right amount of descriptions to make sure the readers can picture the scene vividly, but you don't go overboard and I'm grateful for that. For someone like me who has an attention span of a gnat, that means a lot. Thank you!"

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Intriguing

"The story itself is interesting. The beginning is a rough start from the building of the characters to the format of the town. Is it a local town where everyone knows everyone or is it an outskirt of suburbia? Depicting the characters is seriously lacking. The friends are blurry characters presuming they all have their individual traits that separate them. Most readers read to get the meat and potatoes of their characters and always claim the book is better than the movie, unfortunately I’m missing that detail here. It’s an interesting story but there a lot of details that need to be cleaned up and clarified. "

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One of the best

"If I could give this book a better rating I would. Was a great book one which I really loved and have recommended to many people. Awesome book. 101% would recommend. "

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recommended

"i was hooked at the beginning and i recommend it to anyone who like a good mystery. i cant wait for the next chapter to be released😊👏"

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A fantastic novel

"No readers would want to miss this novel. It was captivating and a page-turner. I loved the plots and the characterisation of the characters. Not to forget, I love the setting of the book and the first sentence was striking. Plus I love the book cover! Don't you ever miss this novel!"

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What Happened to Erin

"It's great emotional writing with lots of plots. I would recommend this book to people because of the mystery hidden within it and how it follows many characters. "

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What happened to Erin

"I like the book alot so far i just wanna know what happens next!❤️"

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ERIN

"I could have rated more accurately had I been able to read. To many make comments, 4 I think and I'm only at the 4TH CHAPTER"

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