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"This is a good start, but your book can improve a lot. Title and Cover- Cover sucks, title is alright. Blurb- I would like to see more details. I know that it's about zombies and Minecraft, what who are the main characters? What do they do? Your summary doesn't tell the reader much. The Chapters- I'm afraid there isn't a very good character development, and it's difficult at times to see who the main character is. The pacing is too fast for my taste and I often don't understand what's going on. Your grammar can also improve a lot. I found many mistakes, all of which can be solved easily. Chapter 5 confused me a lot. Was it a glitch, or is chapter 5 just devoid of words? Overall, I think you have a good start but there is a lot of room for improvement."

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