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It is really different!

"It is a teens story with a touch of adult matters! It has action, thriller, romance and sci-fi! Can be continued with other stories. I liked it!"

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The facility

"Beautifully written story, loved how you brought the characters to life . It felt that by the end I really knew all of them. Thanks and can't wait for the next story "

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The facility

"Great book again no really into younger characters I really enjoyed the book. Most readers should read this book. Thanks for writing it. Is there going to be a 2nd book ? If so please let me know so I can look for it."

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The Facility

"OMG I loved loved loved this book!!! Not usually my kind of book, but loved it nonetheless! Interesting twist at the end, also wondering if there's going to be a part 2. My guess is, that first 'blood draw' that Peg or somebody did when they were unconscious, was really to place a tracker there. I don't know how to describe this book, it isn't a supernatural or romance book, but where some people and/or children are born with abilities, and some are captured. Read on, though, dear readers... it isn't really gory either. Not a knock, just more of an FYI to those that can't take gory or whatever. Just some shooting, and that's all I'll go into here as I don't want to spoil it."

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Fun, entertaining

"Well written, and fun story. Ends on a cliff hanger. The story moves quickly. Kept me on my seat"

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Kadero

"Great story but a lot of incorrect words, misspelled such as God instead of dog🤷‍♀️ still enjoyed the story interesting plot!"

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The facility

"This book is super interesting. I love the twists and turns it says this is book one of two I don’t know if there was another book coming or what the name of it is but I will definitely read it you’re a great writer keep up the great work you’re amazing thank you for writing this"

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The facility

"Liked the twist ending of who is the director"

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