Really interesting

"I have to say, I wasn't sure what to think of the story at first. When you see someone in the opening scene stumbling home drunk, I wasn't sure how it would turn out. The ending was surprising and made me smile. I generally don't like cursing in a story, maybe it's because of how I've been brought up. I didn't mind the milder swear words, but in my opinion and experience, the F bomb doesn't really add anything to a story. Overall I would say that this was an interesting read and there really was no way to tell how it would end until you got there. The only indication was the old man's first name. (= If you are planning on writing more chapters, I would be thrilled to see how it truly ends."