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What is your opinion?
ltsplay
"This just killed me when you stopped. I am ready for the rest of the story. Grabbed my attention and kept it .Very good start.. ok let's keep going. this is a great plot and ready to erupt. now you just have piqued my curiosity. Can't wait for what Amissa's decision on what to do. I really do like the tension between Captain Amalilth and Amissa..I would like to know how the elves came into power and the early days of Amissa."
We’re con
"So far I find it slow paced. I’m trying to figure out why she doesn’t just go to where her parents are. I’m sure if she does this the other slaves would rise up."
