Forgotten Daughter by FixieGirl at Inkitt
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Forgotten Daughter

Summary

This is the short story of a fragile heart. The forgotten daughter of the malfoys. I wrote this on a different website.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Forgotten Daughter

Love. That was a word unknown in Maya's Volcabulary.

Revenge? She could understand. Vengeance? She could understand that to. But love? She couldn't understand that.

Some say Love is the heart of the soul. But Maya knew love is different.

Maybe because she was forgotten. Maybe because she was teased. Maya knew love is a weakness. Or so she thought.

Her heart was closed to everyone. Until she was truly loved.

Love is a fragile thing and so is the heart.

Maya's heart was broken once and she would never let that happen ever again. Maya's heart was broken by Harry Potter.

Twice actually.

The story doesn't mention this part.

That the hero broke a heart.

This was Maya's story.

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Shocking

Good Writing

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Good Writing

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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