Hello, fellow Finrod lover :P

"As a fan of Finrod, I think this was a very enjoyable story to read for me. I'm new to this website but not to fanfiction. It was, in my opinion, an excellent expansion on Tolkien's summary of the event. You described very well the emotion/thought path that Finrod goes through/experiences upon seeing the Edain. If I had to take you to task on this, I would say that you definitely needed to proof-read/double-check it once more, there are quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes. Also, I would tweak the dialogue a little to make it more fitting for the ancient time of the story, (the way they would speak then,) and the misunderstanding of the languages. I would recommend this story to hard-core Silmarillion readers, people who would know what this story was about, and also to Finrod fans. I hope you find this helpful! Stay awesome, and keep on writing! ~EverElven"