What is your opinion?
Loved It!
"I have just finished the series and I was so sad I almost started crying because of how it ended. I like this ending much better. Some sentences were a little repetitive and not the best worded, but overall I think it was SO GOOD. I didn't like that the city still lost their memories, but I guess you can have Tris and Chicago. Overall, thanks for making me feel better. I thought the cake part was funny and I am glad everyone ended up alive and that Tris and Tobias are getting married. This is the happy ending I longed for at the close of the book."
It's amazing OMG I love it
"This short snipet of a book is amazing and I want to continue reading make it longer please I love it Also the way your punctuation is its all the best book I have ready other then like published books"
Cake's not a topic
"Overall, this is a good story with lots of fluff. However, I feel like you need to have a stronger central theme than cake. Maybe an aspect of their relationship, or a specific trait or emotion would be better. Tobias just seems to cling to cake a little too much. Furthermore, some of the story is a little rushed. Slow down, and let Tobias enjoy his time with Tris."
