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Very great indeed <3

"This story was amazing! It's a pairing that I'm sure many people have made mentally, and one of my friends even asked if Jessie and James were a couple or something like that. I was always excited to see what would happen next, and the addition of a new Pokemon was a nice touch. (I'm actually doing that with a Pokemon fanfiction I'm writing. The story's not up yet, though.) I might even try to draw what I imagine it looking like... Anyway, there was some spelling mistakes I had seen, but they did not bother me much due to being minor and few in number. Overall, the story was great, and I wasn't disappointed! When I had first started using Inkitt, there was no Pokemon fanfictions that would come up when you searched for them. Now there are quite a few, and this was the first I chose to read, and I don't regret it!"

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I LOVED this!!!!

"This story was absolutely adorable and put the biggest smile on my face all the way through! I love Team Rocket and always thought Jessie and James would make a great couple, and this little story was perfect! Your plot was so clever with the mysterious Pokémon and I really liked how everything was paced! I also especially liked that Meowth came back in the story, I was missing him!! I also really liked that you included the “twerps”, and without even saying their actual names. It was very Team Rocket :) The way you had them leave the team and still decide to chase Ash around at the end was just sooooo adorable I love love love it!! Thank you for writing such an adorable story!!! :)"

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