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If Only

"If only there was such a thing as a perfect world...I wish there was for Naruto and the gang. I really enjoyed your reintroduction, it was sweet to read all their inner truths and confessions. I almost shed a tear reading it because you got their reactions right on point. I think it would have been great if they did have this reintroduction to begin with, who knows maybe things would have turned out different. Or maybe not? That's the beauty of it. Anyway, I loved how simple it would have been for them all to talk to each other and the honesty you perfectly captured from them all.. Good job :)"

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