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Are you Alice

"I like how this story uses poetry and plot at the same time. It incorporates all the elements of wonderland in a simple poem. It keeps us in suspense when it says the story's not over and it makes us wonder what the next chapter will be. Is this meant to be horror? My parody of Alice in Wonderland is Alice's Tragic World about children going to military school and focuses on mental illnesses, anxiety, and abuse."

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