Destined To The Alpha (Book 1) (Editing)

mils_28

30 chapters read

Marvelous!

"Great storyline and the characters were even better! Your writing skills and style are amazing!"

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Cora

34 chapters read

Destined to the alpha

"Love the book! It has an amazing plot, hate the cliff hanger but knowing there will be a sequel makes it worth it. Would love to see more of Kai. Don’t know how Eric would fit back in unless he’s a were or is mates with one but your an amazing writer so write how you envision the book coming to life! Can’t wait for the sequel!"

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mamacass2

33 chapters read

Destined to the Alpha book 1

"If book 2 is as good as book 1 i just simply cant wait. Having some of jordans point of view would b amazing. Oo bring eric back and more kai would b wonderful but if they become evil please allow them to b saved. And please what ever u do dont kill off jordan or jade. "

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Lynn Payne

34 chapters read

Destined to the Alpha

"I loved this book. I loved the characters and their roles. I’m glad she finally found out about herself and her powers along with giving Jorden some too. I’m really hoping you have a sequel to this book soon. You did a great job. It was written beautifully. "

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Destined to the Alpha

" love this story, hopefully a sequel soon.🐺🔥 wonderful storyline. would also love to see jordan's pov. would like to learn more about the other 3 protectors. I will certainly read your next stories. thanks❣😍 "

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Kerri Burch

23 chapters read

Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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masihnovaira

27 chapters read

Excellent writer 👌👌💎

"Seriously you are too good. I learnt from such lovely writers like you only to write👌⭐😊😍please do me a favour read my two novels named hurdles of life reveal our destination, unbelievable turns and please give a review over it"

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scionmama18

24 chapters read

Destined to the alpha

"Great story!!! Just still have repeating phrases & some words. "

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debbie

22 chapters read

Great

"This is a awsome story I love how it twists and turns the story is about the wolf's and it gets better and better"

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patricia

22 chapters read

Destined to the Alpha

"I hope that there are some more chapters coming."

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"Love this book "

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Alexandria

34 chapters read

Keep em comin

"I love this books and got completely lost in it. The way you transition into the sexy scenes is very classy and authentic. I would love to continue to read more from this author. "

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hakiwai

28 chapters read

Destined to the Aloha

"Really enjoying this so far keep it up👍"

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DC4ever

8 chapters read

Destined for the Alpha

"Great story. "

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daicilyn33

0 chapters read

Destined to the Alpha

"Love every minute of the book! every chapter is captivating! I can’t wait for the next update❤️❤️❤️ "

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Great book!!!!!

"Keep writing and working on your grammatical errors otherwise this is a great story and I can't wait to read the rest of the story. "

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Gunjan

20 chapters read

Till now the is good I must say the plot is really amazing and I loved the story so far

"Till now the is good I must say the plot is really amazing and I loved the story so far. Even the grammatical errors are almost zero. It's just that the updates are slow and being a bookworm I just can't control myself but read the book in just single day. Hope to get an update soon. All the wishes and love with you author 😉"

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Destined to the Alpha

"I love the story line, and the characters. It is a bit difficult to read in spots due to the grammatical errors. There are several misspellings, and it has a lot of punctuation errors. Overall, I like the story, and I am excited to read chapter 8. "

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Mysti

17 chapters read

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"I’m enjoying it so far"

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Destined to the Alpha

"The story started to turn good only halfway through. For the first half, I wasn't overly fond of how spineless Jade was when it came to Jordan. In general, I don't enjoy the books that have the characters just falling in love because of a mate bond without even knowing each other. It screams manipulation to me. That being said, when she started getting her own powers the story was nice. If you edit a few technical errors it'd be even better!"

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