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Brains

"Now, that was a very nice short story, I read it in one go. The pace was good, the characters plausible, except that one girl (until you get to the end, then she suddenly makes sense as well.) The ending was good, and absolutely surprising - A real plot twist I wasn't expecting. "

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Kadero

"Wow...that certainly turned! Loved it!!"

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Brains

"All I can say is wow I never expected that. Very good story. Big props to the writer of this one. "

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Brains

"That was a great short story I loved it, especially the ending! Did not see that coming!"

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Brains

"Great short story. Nice twist at the end. Original. I did not see that coming. I recommend this story to all zombie story lovers. Going to check out what else this author has written. Cheers!"

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BRAINS

"I like the turn of events and the characters. Book II soon!"

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FULL OF PLOT TWISTS!!!!! You will keep on guessing until the end. This story is definitely, a must read and share. What are you waiting for? Read it now! :)

"I love everything. All the elements of this story are well-balanced. Really, the author Chad Osorio writes well with roller coaster twists and turns. The characters are amazing! And the clues will blind you that you won't know what's really happening. Once you start reading this, you won't be able to put it down. You would want to read it until the end or you cannot really sleep thinking about them. Believe me, this story should be read by you. And you will share this to your friends because this story is really awesome in all levels. :) "

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Mindblowing!

"Relatable characters got me hooked! The author's writing style is lit! The description of each character and scene is so vivid as if you're in an RPG. Thanks for the immersive experience!, author!"

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Good base, but rewrite it

"You mixed up two of your characters. That proves no interest in the characters, readers or the story. The extra girls were to stupid and silly. And it seemed to me that you were in a hurry to reach the end if the story as quick as possible to get it over with"

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