Inkitt
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Tracey

"Ah poor Isabella I hope she’s ok"

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Great

"Great when will you continue "

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you

"so I know there are only 3 chapters out but lemme tell u,,, I have a thing for bad guys and they always attract me,,i love ur story and I need more updates asap, please and this Lucas is tttly my type :3"

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Best story

"I'm writing this review now because I know your story is going to be super hit. From the starting your story was kind of exciting and it make me want more chapters. Let me tell you a secret but please don't judge me ok.. I want a Lucas in my life, just the way you wanted a mystery man, lol. I always have this special liking for bad boy kind of stories and your story is exactly what I needed. I love every bit of it, especially I get what I want part.. ha ha lmao.AND PLEASE UPDATE MOREEEEE....😊😊😊😊😊 "

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A review of you

"This review is early in the story, but the chapters written are powerful And Brilliant character studies! I could feel myself in the story as I read , and was quite stimulated by the authors descriptive prose. A great story! Looking forward to reading more! "

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Good so far

"It's certainly kept my attention. Hard to put down . In suspense "

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