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Well done author

"Great worm... Loving the suspense"

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Silence DS Addison #1

"The character of a new detective facing serial killer on her first case is compelling and written strongly enough to give readers a strong inclination to check back often! Although listed as Complete, the story has ongoing chapters; I was very glad to see that the writer added a new chapter, as I almost dinged the story on review for false advertised as being complete. Thank you Ms Dalton for being online for us at Inkitt.com "

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Creative story line

"Aside from some grammatical errors, it’s well written with a creative story line. Describing the characters appearance in more detail would help readers picture who they are reading about. Otherwise, I think the author does a great job at setting the scene and I’m looking forward to finishing it to see if my instinct of who did it is correct!"

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Eagerly waiting for more

"The plot looks extremely promising and can't wait to read more of it. It looks like it will be having more suspense, thriller and even a bit of romance. The description of the murders , the state of the victims, the emotions portrayed, etc were all wonderful . Since it is just the first of its series the amount of content was little in terms of plot but was entertaining . Good job 👏 "

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Silent murder

"Suspence friend good"

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