What is your opinion?
New Fangirl
"The author effortlessly weaves the past with the present as we dive into the life of Alex Tredinneck. As you progress from chapter to chapter, you are given insight as to the workings of the protagonist's mind as he comes to terms with his life and feelings and how his decisions are affecting himself and those around him. The author does well to create a multifaceted character who is fiercely loyal, but flawed. The other characters Alex interacts with have their own host of idiosyncrasies that help highlight his nature. They feel like real, believable people, not just fictional characters. Even though there are a few grammatical missteps throughout the story, it is nothing that pulls away from the content. A simple fine-tooth comb sweep for editing purposes will just further buff up this gem of a story. I have only read up to chapter 14 at this point, but I plan to continue through until the end. I need to know how the different kinks in Alex's life will play out in the end."
Oops! I think I'm Inlove💕
"I'd be sincere, books I love to read are primarily romance and fantasy. That being said, I think your book has one way or the other changed my whole perspective and I think I'm gonna add drama to my best genre list. So I loved your book. Your writing style was great though at some point the characters you introduced all at once confused the flow of the story(my understanding of the different characters) . Your plot is exceptional, I've read very few books centred on celebrities and popularity. It makes this book unique. Your grammar is on point, just a very few of some errors it can even go unnoticed. I loved everything about your book even the synopsis. The paragraph layout. I suggest you leave some spaces in between your writing to make reading it more easier. Reading this book has made me believe you have the potential to reach great heights. Good Job! Keep it up! And keep working hard!"
