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The Elementalist

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Summary

this is a story I wrote many years ago and thought I might as well post it and also @xxQUEENxALLYxx was curious so here you go yes I know it has many mistakes such as really no periods it is I guess one realllllllllly long run-on sentence

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Awakening

It was the first of March when I woke up to get ready for school but what I thought was going to be a normal old school-day was not normal at all. After I was finished getting ready and headed to the bus stop while waiting there I noticed a man looking at me the man looked around his thirties after he saw I noticed him he hid behind a bush. once the bus showed up I got on and watched as the guy got into a car and started following the bus by then I was really worried. First, he watches me and now he is following me to school I wondered what it was he wanted the bus ride was really uncomfortable. knowing I had a man following me we arrived at the school.

I got off the bus and went straight to the cafeteria hoping the guy would lose me in the large crowd of people I managed to lose him after the bell rang to go to class. I went to my first class which was chemistry and today our teacher was showing us how a fire cannot burn without oxygen. after a demonstration, our teacher gave us all a candle. While looking at the candle I started thinking about fire and all of a sudden a small flame appear on the candle. the person next to me jumped when he saw the candle come to life with no apparent way it could light.

When my teacher look over and saw that I had lit the candle he asked me “how do you light that without any match or lighter?” I replied “I don’t know I just looked at it and all of a sudden a flame came to life I don’t know how it happened.” he looked at me frightened, and I was happy when the bell rang for me to go to my next class which was nutrition. Today we were going to the garden to plant some watermelon seeds. after we went over a few things we walked over to the garden and were all handed some seeds. once I planted the seeds. I watched as they almost immediately started to sprout and grow.

I looked over to my teacher who was watching bewildered as to how the seed was already growing. I was bewildered myself because first I started a fire by just thinking about fire. Now I was watching as seeds I just planted were already sprouting and blooming flowers that turned into two small watermelons that turned into nice ripe watermelons and stopped when the watermelons were at the perfect point for picking and eating.

Once the bell rang I saw the same man that was watching & following me earlier, but he looked a little different in the shadows he looked almost like the grim reaper. I felt a chill go down my spine when I saw him but then when he emerged from the shadows he looked like a normal person. During school, I didn’t have any other magical things happen to me. after I arrived home I went to the backyard of our two-story house we lived on a family orchard but that is aside from the point.

Well, I was messing around in the backyard I noticed everywhere I walked there was a slight breeze that was around me when it was a calm day with no wind. Now I was really freaked first I lit a candle by just thinking about fire than after that I made a watermelon grow completely ripe in all of two minutes now I was creating a breeze everywhere I walked.what is next I wonder aloud and sure enough, water started spraying out and spinning around me like a spiral.

suddenly I hear what sounded like a stick break under someone’s or something’s foot and I looked to where the sound was coming from and saw the same man who has been following me all day by now I was just annoyed and irked at the same time. this man has been following me without a care in the world that I knew he was following, so I asked why have you been following me? He replied in a raspy voice I wanted to see for myself if the prophecy was true and that the hero of mankind has been reborn into the world and it looks like it is true he has returned. In the form of yourself, these powers you possess are those of a powerful being who has been in slumber for 2 millennia, and he awakens to yet again save humanity from a powerful demon who has arisen from the depths of hell the demon. You will fight is much stronger and more powerful than the ones you have fought before.

Remember your training from 10 millennia when you first discovered your powers over the elements of fire, earth, air, and water seek out the sorcerer in the mountains of Ireland. He will train you in the power of the elements. So you can furthermore regain control over your powers before they take control of you. Now go before it is too late beware of the dangers that lay ahead in your path to your ultimate destiny. I was about to ask how I was supposed to get from Rhode Island to the mountains of Ireland but before I could the man disappeared into thin air.

I walked home when I got there my parents asked me how my day was and I told them about the experiences I had that day but the strange thing was that they didn’t freak out when I told them about the newly discovered powers. I had instead it was the exact opposite they told me that they have known ever since I was born that I had these powers, but they never told me in order to protect me they told me the same thing the strange man told me they said I need to seek out the sorcerer in the mountains of Ireland. they then gave me money, a bag full of essentials, and a sword they told me that the sword was called Excalibur the sword of ice, and was the same sword king Arthur had used.

They also told me that this sword was one of four swords that had the power of the elements. Then they told me that the sword had a twin called clarent the sword of fire. they also said that if I found all four of the swords that together they would create aether the sword of time. then they sent me off on the journey of a lifetime.


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author

those furies felt your fury lol

6 years
2
author

Amazing first chapter! I was intrigued by the start of it! It needs some paragraph splitting and more shorter sentences... but overall it’s amazing. and cannot wait for an update!

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lucky for you i just edited it and made it hopefully easier to read

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