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"Oh my this is just so sad. Even to the end I was hoping for a goddess intervention. It never came. "

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At the stoke of midnight

"I would like other end but anyway it was a good story!"

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Powerful

"Wow all because of two crazy guys. So much death and pain. Great tale. Thank you for sharing."

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Oh my goodness...

"That was the saddest thing ever...I'm so very heartbroken and surely didn't want it to end this way....what will I do now 😞😢"

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At The Stroke Of Midnight

"This is my first changeling story. This carries a much darker atmosphere than what I'm used to. Azalea gives herself much too hard of a time. Her new Alpha had done what he had to do. Either way she would have been an alpha's wife. (Luna?) I was sad when she died. I was hoping she would get to see her parents again. I'm not sure her parents would have understood her position though. I would like to read more of your work soon Best Wishes🌹"

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At the stroke of midnight

"This was a great story, it had a dad ending. You are a very talented writer I really enjoyed it, I would love to see another book about this story. Thanks "

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At the stroke of Midnight

"Well that was a sad ending. It was written beautifully though. "

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At the stroke of midnight

"What a wonderfull story full of love ,remorseand pain .I loved all of this story"

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At the Stroke of Midnight

"If this story isn’t actually complete and there is another part to it, then I may need to change my review. The overall story was strong and well written with a tiny portion pressing on repetitively even with it being a short story. The ideas and characters were quite brilliant, however the end was abrupt and seemingly rushed. "

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