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AMAZING!!

"This book is soo amazing! It's got a cunning person turning soft and a bright innocent woman. I absolutely love this story! Thanks so much for publishing it! Totally recommend it to people! Read it!"

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Tale as old as time

"Great story. If you use the first ending, it can't be the end. Good fae play a role. Realizing the power love holds, good fae seek to transform, rather than harm. This time when they kiss, he is transferred the power of good fae for dark. Dark power dies and doesn't go to the evil witch. Because Belle still needs protection, she also receives good fae power. Or you could go with your alternate ending. Best wishes to you. 🌹"

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Tale as old as time

"There were some grammatical and spelling errors, but despite them, I enjoyed reading this story. I liked that you based it off a fairytale that is not very known and I liked how you went into detail when describing things like the mirror and the Dark Castle. Overall, it is a nice book that I would share to my friends. Great job and keep up the good work!"

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Looove It!

"This is the best story I have stumbled upon, and so glad I did. I am entrapped in the story and having watch One Upon A Time, this is a fresh of breath air on fan fiction and spin offs I have ever read. You are an excellent writer keeping us readers jn this push-pull of tangible palpable romantic tension, and the demise of enemies just add spice."

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Daggers n dust

"I liked this book.the book is very enchanting.Keeps you on your toes. Sometimes a little slow. Would recon this book to other readers who like enchanting stories."

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Love it

"Love this keep going "

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