What is your opinion?
Amazing!
"I love this book specially Alas character. This book worth reading. 😍 plz update next chapter soon. "
Love it
"I love the story, cant wait for the next chapter."
Awesome
"Love it 😍..... Please update......keep it up girl"
Interesting story, good read!
"The story still needs little work on especially on grammar area. The outline looks good, and has a possiblity to grew into a really good story. Only be careful of the grammar, but loved it. Big hugs ❤"
Gorgeous story, but grammar!!
"The story is promising, the characters are intriguing and the past is dipped in mystery. The way you intricately paint sceneries and settings is just perfect! So much potential! One small problem: The blurb is too long, it needs to be shorter and catch reader's attention. You also include '.......' too much. This gets repetitive. I think you can make the story itself better if you try to use an editing and grammar app to help you with your editing! There are various spelling mistakes and typos that are too frequent to go overlooked. You have to look at the capitals and add them when necessary, the 'i' needs to be changed to an 'I', their needs to be they're. This can overall improve the experience for readers. Good luck and all the best! Much love, Coffee."
Good
"Like the story "
