Rise of Almighty

"I will start off to say. I like the concept of the story. Giving off a bit of a mysterious vibe I should say. Making the feeling with that woman a bit more how should I say, intriguing. Due to how she disappears. The beginning within the prologue does great to grip at the reader. However, this is where I have to stop with this. I am aware that grammar and punctuation are not your strong point. I really do feel like if you had a decent grasp on this, it can be something amazing. You already have the plot in check. Try and remember, when it comes to dialogue tags. Periods always goes inside. Try to also remember that commas are used as a small stop. A quick breather I can say, while a period brings it to a full stop. These can also be used stylistically to bring out a bit more of a unique situation to your story. One more thing is that, for smaller body paragraphs. If they are close together, try merging them. This way it gives the story a bit more bulk I can say. I like your style of writing, hence bringing the action within it. As well as the premise of the plot."