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Best story

"Reading your story gave me such a mix of emotions joy, heartbreak, and pure excitement. It’s rare to find something that sticks with me like this. You’re incredible. Please tell me your next story is on the way soon"

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A Promise He Could Trust

"I love it a lot. I like the way Snape told Harry that he won't go back to his Uncles and Umbridge."

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Amazing

"Amazing work, keep writing ☺️☺️"

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A Promise He Could Trust

"This story is beautiful in a cruel way. The writer portrayed Harry’s hate toward the Dursleys perfectly, and the compassion Snape showed him was heartwarming. I loved it. "

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A Promise He Could Trust

"I enjoyed your story and eager to find out what happens next"

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Amazed. Absolutely amazed.

"I LOVED it! It is amazing! Can you write more like this? It's the best one I have ever read! You are truly amazing!"

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Not Expected

"This is a fantastic story with a turn I wasn't expecting it to take! It got dark, and brutish, it got tortured, and so child abusive. Seeing Professor Snape feel for Harry was very new, and I like seeing this side of him expressed as such. Well written, and a good concept. Well written, and I enjoyed the smooth flow of POV, and seeing parts of characters I wasn't expecting. :) - demigodwitchavenger"

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