Inkitt
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Waiting for your next book

"😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍woooowwww..really amazing...what an idea! what a concept!!! i am impressed...keep going..i hope you will do the best...this concept is really unique...i have enjoyed a lot..not only me my brother has also read the book...we have fallen love with this book...i wish i could keep a copy of this book...really amazig...i am waiting for your next book..best of luck..."

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An unique story

"I really enjoyed the story..I want to see a film on it...i want to appreciate the writer..so creative and unique. .full of mystry and cuteness...please write more stories...i am really waiting..this is your first book. I think u will do the best in the next book...keep it up...good job..i will suggest everyone to read this story..."

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waiting for the right time

"till now there is a lot of suspense...i want to read more...the story is really amazing..."

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I am confused

"Reading your book, I really appreciated the fact that Arpit has a past. It brings depth to his character and also may explain his behaviour. However, I was really confused about some aspects of the story. The main character seems to have a good relationship with her father but he seems to be cruel by not letting her go out on her own. Does her dad have a personality disorder or a mental illness that makes him act like that? Or did he have a bad experience that made him so weird? I also didn't think that an employer would refer to their employee as 'my child'. First, if she is legally able to hold a job she is not a child and second, it doesn't make sense. And I also noticed several language issues and issues with punctuation. Some of the sentences were written in incorrect English. If English is not your first language, then I totally understand and I'd advise you to get your story edited. However, I do believe that your story has potential and that it could be a success."

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