What is your opinion?
Pleasantly surprised...
"I really liked it! I found the story easy to follow and yet the plot still remained tantalizingly aloof. Usually the beginning of a story is the hardest part to get right but the author executed it rather well...it had this fish biting! Some of the writing was a bit rough, but I'm generally not that interested in grammar so much. Just so long as what you're trying to convey...moves me. Its a shame you give away the mysterious man it the intro! Anyway, keep up the good work."
alrighty then
"It was a nice story overall, but in some parts I felt confused and I didn't know what was actually happening. Some of the wording in the story could've been written better, so maybe a beta reader might help next time. I love Dramione and I really enjoyed this story, but it has potential to improve more and evolve into something greater."
Interesting
"I didn't know how I felt about this when I first started. I knew that when I scrolled past it that the only reason i was going towards it was because I thought the cover was pretty. The description seemed interesting enough so I thought 'Why not?'. Anway, the story overall was good, there was the issue that at certain points I didn't really know what was going on and sometimes I got lost. I was interested though, I loved the wording at the end. It made it feel complete without feeling heartbreaking. If that makes any sense at all."
