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Great Job!

"Hey! So I read your story and I have to say it was super simple and cute. I was not predictable at all, it was very interesting and had me guessing till the very end. Most importantly, I was hooked until the very end. Also, I liked how your chapters were not dragged or unnecessarily lengthy. They were perfect size, with great description. Thoroughly enjoyed myself. Great Job Girl"

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Sensing Hot Romance!

"Aw I love highschool romance books. It is obvious I am gonna love this book, haha.We have a real hooker here🔥But on a different note, I would suggest you to end the sentences with a single dot rather than using three or more ans use capitalisation, and gaps in between punctuations and words. We usually use more than one dot or a dash to show interrupted sentences. Gray, the name is really cool and everytime I hear Grey, it remindse of Christian Grey From Fifty Shades.I can't wait to read more.Good luck!!"

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