Leia jumped inside, shaking. The door hissed opened as rapidly as blaster fire. Two Imperial Stormtrooper guards stepped in, heads lowered, and stood at attention at either side of the opening, blasters held at the ready in both hands. Breathing, strong, constant, yet as artificial as the breath of a dying man on a respirator, met her ears. Vader, The Emperor's Right Hand, the incarnation of evil, a dark angel of death and vengeance, descended the steps and entered the cell, nearly bending halfway over to avoid bumping his head. He stood erect, fists on his hips, cape hanging behind him, rustling slightly. His eyes, empty red globes, stared at her, like the unyielding gaze of a predatory animal about to strike. Dark power emanated from him, like a malevolent presence that followed him wherever he went. A power that might swallow her life in moments. I am Princess of Alderaan. If I am to die, I will die on my feet. Leia rose, forcing her shaking knees to still. Her hands hung limp at her sides. She swallowed and set her jaw, holding her chin high. "Come to finish the job?" Vader spoke as though he hadn't heard her. His voice was a deep rumble, like thunder. "Grand Moff Tarkin awaits your presence on the bridge."
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kitkatbar29: So this first book in this series I liked. A good plot that flowed well for the most part with some twists along the way, good well developed characters... there are a few technical mistakes, but nothing to harsh. I must say toward the end of the book there were some issues with like a quick change ...
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Michele L: I loved this story!! Each guy had something that was only hers for them to share. I do wish it would have been explained the final sleeping arrangements because poor Dan was still on the couch lolI can't wait for more like this
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lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!
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lblomme: I love all the twists and turns and still a happy ending! Good strong characters, a big heart, and hope. Very well written, full characters, and great imagination!
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Laura: A lighthearted and entertaining story. Well done! 🩷
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Gallandro7: I originally added this because it looked interesting and I was curious how the mate process would go. I almost removed it due to several other books ahead of it, but I took an afternoon and read the entire thing in one go.I was pleasantly surprised at how well the book was crafted and that the mate...
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Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.
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