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Desires in John forest

"Wow....this was totally Amazing and a very emotional rollercoaster ride. This story was off the chain and can't wait for the next book to this story."

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Desires of zohn's forest

"The details of this book are incredible. The feelings that flow...... wow.. I am honestly left without words..... "

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Amazing

"Love this story very well written. The suspension was great"

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Zohns forest

"Great story well written"

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Excellent

"Love it very sad and romantic "

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Great read, lots of twists and turns

"Great story! Really good character development with emotions, it draws you in. I remember in the begging when I started to read this ....wait I thought I was reading a romance, I'm glad I stuck with it. Beautifully written some small spelling and grammatical errors but not enough to draw away from the story. Cant wait to read more of your books."

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Desires in Zohn's forest

"Quite a different story! I must say I thoroughly enjoyed the plot! The entire story was quite captivating and the characters were unique. However the story could have been more interesting to learn how Rowan was trying to adjust to the city life. How he was learning all the new things. And even how Raven was trying to adjust back. For everything she had gone through it wouldn't have been that easier to fall back to the city life routine she had before she went ro the Zohn's forest. There were a few grammatical errors which I believe were due to typing errors. A little bit of editing would help sort it out. Other than that the story was amazing! "

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Amazing

"I absolutely loved this story! The pure lust and love. The confusion of it all. It left me wanting to not stop reading! I cannot wait for the next book"

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Desires of Zohns forest

"A very nice, thrilling story with a touch of romance. Something totally new and very addictive. Well done author. Your book was just amazing. Can't wait for the second one. "

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Dezires in zohns forest

"I enjoyed it. It's a good start."

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Desires in zohn’s forest

"Binged in one day I enjoyed it very much ready for more "

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Desires of Zohn's Forest

"Another amazing book! I couldn't put it down and I even have my husband intrigued that he wants to read it. I can actually see this book being a movie. The writing of what took place in the forest gave me anxiety and it felt like I was living through it myself. I was surprised with the ending and I am keeping an eye out for the second book."

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Desires in Zohn's Forest

"This novel is something else! Though I would change the first genre to 'thriller'. The characters are really well developed and also the plot. Normally I dislike time jumps but in this story they are perfect and not at all difficult to read! Please, to all other readers on Inkitt: Read this story!"

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Game of Predators and Prey

"It's obviously one of the best stories I've ever read. From the start I was hooked to the story. All the chapters were very interesting. And made me wanting to continue reading. All the characters were very unique, especially Raven. I loved her. The plot was awesome 'Predators and Prey'. I'll recommend this story for sure. The writing style was awesome mixing it both with Present and the Past happenings and then continuing with Present. Loved it. ❤️❤️"

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Never going to a party in the wood again!

"From the very start, this book surprised me for its originality. A harmless teenage escapade quickly turns into a deadly conspiracy. A few chapters into the book, you're gawking at your screen, unable to understand how everything turned so out so cruel and dangerous. This story has so many complex characters. I love Raven's reaction to it all. She's brave but not without weaknesses. Great character development there! My favorite is Quill. I won't spoil this for anyone, but... author... I want to know more about his thoughts. In a book with so many victims, I feel you somehow neglected this guy and he deserves to tell his story. I will be waiting for the sequel! Thank you for the wonderful read, and keep on writing!"

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Love this

"Update soon!!!"

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Desires in Zhon's Forest

"I liked it, Enjoyed it actually.I was always hanging on the edge , awesome.Tho I'm still left hanging,the plot is great.Can't wait for the follow up."

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Story is not complete?

"This story has been labeled as complete but is definitely not. I'd love to see it complete. I found it very compelling. But I wouldn't recommend it unless it gets finished. There's no closure to anything. It feels like the story ends during the setup. "

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