Mayaserana

Santiago, Chile

English is not my first language, but where is the fun in doing things the easy way?! If you can help me improve my writing, I'd love it!

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Luminous

From the beginning, the quality of language in this book blew me away. The descriptions are vivid and the emotions depicted are strong enough for you to feel connected to Meya as soon as she is in the scene. There is deepness and meaning for each character's actions and feelings. I'm looking forward to see where this story might lead, but I've been enjoying reading it so far. I've felt inspired by this author to improve my own work. It's good to come across this level of writing. I'm loving it!

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Every gamer dream!

If you like video games, specially MMORPG, you are going to enjoy this book! Just like in a real game, you meet amazing and unique characters and every risk the protagonists take is thrilling.
The writing could use some editing, but the story is exciting and I can't wait to see where it leads.

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So unexpected!

I liked this story from the beginning, even though I thought "yeah, I know where this is going". BUT NO!! The plot twist was refreshing and fun, and the story got even better!
The ending was really well written, different from the "and they lived happily ever after" stuff. Great work author!

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Loved it!

This is going to sound weird, but I feel this book is really good for all the wrong reasons. As a paranormal thriller, the story is very interesting, but what I loved about this book is how the characters react to the idea of a clairvoyant. It feels so realistic and natural, and how everyone builds trust was definitely the best part.
I do feel it needs an epiloge :D (psst! maybe the fish didn't make it but she still can see 6 in the tank!)

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I'll be back!

I want this on my reading list. In a place full of wonderful and heart-wrenching stories, reading this made me feel at ease and fascinated.

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Action-packed, wonderful story!

I love the style of this book! It's fast-paced and exciting, throwing unexpected hints from the start. What an amazing plot twist in the middle! The main characters are interesting and well developed, but the secondary characters completely steal the picture! It can get a little confusing while reading the unknown POV, but overall, the story flows smoothly. Looking forward for more chapters!

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Never going to a party in the wood again!

From the very start, this book surprised me for its originality. A harmless teenage escapade quickly turns into a deadly conspiracy. A few chapters into the book, you're gawking at your screen, unable to understand how everything turned so out so cruel and dangerous. This story has so many complex characters. I love Raven's reaction to it all. She's brave but not without weaknesses. Great character development there! My favorite is Quill. I won't spoil this for anyone, but... author... I want to know more about his thoughts. In a book with so many victims, I feel you somehow neglected this guy and he deserves to tell his story. I will be waiting for the sequel! Thank you for the wonderful read, and keep on writing!

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Lovely story!

The author manages to convey so many complex feelings in just one chapter. Without giving many details, I felt immediately drawn to the characters. I'd love for this to turn into a series of short stories. A few grammar issues, but not worthy of taking a star away. Keep up the wonderful work!

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So full of potential!

I liked this story from the beginning, the author's imagination is endless and it was easy to imagine the scenery from her descriptions. I'm not giving a perfect score, because I feel this book needs polishing. I've read good stories that became great after only a first edit, and I feel this is one of those. Great work!

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Stunning!!

A fantastic ending for this trilogy!

Just like the previous two books, Truth or Dare is an emotional rollercoaster. The author has a way with words that just grabs your attention and makes you feel like you know these characters personally. Every chapter is filled with raw images and feelings and you can hardly blink while reading.
It took me two days to read the whole book, simply because I got so mad in the middle I had to stop before throwing my computer out the window. I love it when books cause these reactions in me. IT IS THAT GOOD! I'd love to read more about Antheia and her future, no pressure XD

A few commas and dots missing, but nothing serious enough to take a star away. And honestly, when you are screaming at your screen and pulling your hair after reading some particular chapters, punctuation is the last thing on your mind!

Congratulations on finishing this story! Khaos, Violet, and their family will live forever in my memory!

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I'm so happy I read this!

I was reluctant to read this story at first because mental health is an issue I'm not always comfortable with. I'm no expert in the matter, and often the subject puts me down, but I wanted to give this book a chance and I was not disappointed. On the contrary, this is a wonderful story!
It was truly enjoyable to read such a well-written book, the author uses flashback with impeccable mastery, and Jason's troubled mind is portrayed perfectly with these constant changes, without confusing the reader.
How the truth slowly reveals itself is captivating, and the strong emotional responses are heart-wrenching but so necessary to understand what the characters went through.
It is, in short, a beautiful book, a hidden gem here on Inkitt.
Marvelous work!

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I'm laughing, crying, screaming!

I loved the first book, You Wouldn't Dare, but the story is so brutal and emotional it left me brokenhearted.
This book put me back together! Each chapter fills you with pride and makes you jump on your seat! To witness how each character faced so many trials, and reacted in the most mature, brave, and kind way possible was a treat. Reading how justice is served is invigorating. This whole trilogy is a great read so far, and I can't wait for the third book!
Author! If you chose to edit this book one day, I would suggest to include some interaction with the pack omegas. We know of their struggles and the outcome, but I do believe they deserve to be heard.
I absolutely recommend reading the Khaos trilogy and enjoy the emotional ride! Great work!

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Gripping

Books that display violence and cruelty are not usually my thing, but the author's writing style and talent with words had me hooked. It is a deeply emotional story and between all the suffering, the love between the main characters is like a balm. Their pain and struggles were heartbreaking. The world is not all sunshine and rainbows and books like this shake your heart. I really hope we can get a second book because I'm not ready to leave them!

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I am wowed! :D

I read the first version of this book before it was edited and I loved the story! It's so good to be able to read it again and see how much your writing has improved! I'm afraid I can't remember every detail, but the story feels a lot more solid now and your style is more defined.
All I can say is, GREAT WORK! Long hours in front of your computer had definitely paid off!
Keep going! You are writing a beautiful story!

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Wonderful!

This book was a pleasant surprise from the beginning! The story is captivating and you soon find yourself wanting to know more about the characters personalities and motivations. Never thought I'll be this interested in finding out what a demon is thinking!
I really enjoyed the writing style, eloquent yet coherent. The overall world-building is a little vague, but it does not diminish how engaging the story is. I'm looking forward to reading this until it's completed.
Keep up the good work!

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Wonderful!

I've only started reading this book and I'm hooked. It's beautifuly written, and the main character is really likeable. I feel this is going to be good! I hope to get to read it through its completion.
Please keep up the good work!

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Astonishing!

This is rapidly becoming one of my favourite books on Inkitt. A very original story and beautiful characters, even though is a fantasy story, it's completely believable and so well written. I'm looking forward to read more! Keep up the great work!

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Great story!

Well that escalated quickly!
At first I thought "this is a very sweet, a very simple, romantic tale". But then... PLOT TWIST! And you find yourself reading a social-political drama where young people have to face the reality of their world and choose between a comfortable life for themselves and justice for everyone.
I liked it a lot! Looking forward for the secuel!

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Great story!

I just finished this book and I'm already looking forward for the second one! This is a powerful and emotional story, Emma's journey is intense and painful, but her bravery is encouraging. The struggle between her freedom and her responsibilities is something we can all relate to.
There are some technical things to be improve, some chapters need a better rhythm (punctuation mostly), but I enjoyed this book so, so much.
Keep up the good work author!

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Loved it!

This was my favourite brother so far! :D
I do feel we needed some more Brenton being all lovey-dovey, but anyway, GREAT WORK!

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Powerful

I love when I read something that makes me have strong emotions. This book is not a fairy tale, and it made me so angry at some point, you really hate the hateful characters. But the protagonist has a great personality development and she really makes you feel proud sometimes. Looking forward for the secuel!

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Great characters

I fell in love with this book when I read how they first met. That was perfect!
It always bother me a little how clingy the boys were, they need therapy XD but the story is very sweet and the plot is great.
You should polish it a little because you have a really good story here, we should give our good stories some love!

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Powerful!

This is one of the best books I've read on Inkitt, it was hard to let go.
Claire is an amazing character, she acts childish a couple of times but... hey! She is very young!
I loved how detailed the writing style is, and I can't wait to read the other king's stories.
Wonderful work!!

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Wonderful!

Great plot! I could not stop reading and the twists had me screaming at the screen.
Dante is a wonderful character, I can't wait to read next book!
Uruloki... TOTAL NERDGASM!!! Tolkien rules!!!

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Amazing!

This is a great story, mature and likeable characters. I can't wait to read some more!!!

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Great book!

I loved the characters! Amelia is so brave and smart. It really annoys me when characters make stupid decisions, so this book was realy rewarding in that regard. Adults acting like adults!
The writing style is so nice, I loved how the landscape is described and the details are refreshing.
Awesome work!!

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