Mayaserana

Santiago

English is not my first language, but where is the fun in doing things the easy way?! If you can help me improve my writing, I'd love it!

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Loved it!

This is going to sound weird, but I feel this book is really good for all the wrong reasons. As a paranormal thriller, the story is very interesting, but what I loved about this book is how the characters react to the idea of a clairvoyant. It feels so realistic and natural, and how everyone builds trust was definitely the best part.
I do feel it needs an epiloge :D (psst! maybe the fish didn't make it but she still can see 6 in the tank!)

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Very interesting!

Looks promising! I love stories where the heroin is a badass. I want to read some more!
Larken is adorable <3

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Loved it!

This was my favourite brother so far! :D
I do feel we needed some more Brenton being all lovey-dovey, but anyway, GREAT WORK!

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Powerful

I love when I read something that makes me have strong emotions. This book is not a fairy tale, and it made me so angry at some point, you really hate the hateful characters. But the protagonist has a great personality development and she really makes you feel proud sometimes. Looking forward for the secuel!

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Great characters

I fell in love with this book when I read how they first met. That was perfect!
It always bother me a little how clingy the boys were, they need therapy XD but the story is very sweet and the plot is great.
You should polish it a little because you have a really good story here, we should give our good stories some love!

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Powerful!

This is one of the best books I've read on Inkitt, it was hard to let go.
Claire is an amazing character, she acts childish a couple of times but... hey! She is very young!
I loved how detailed the writing style is, and I can't wait to read the other king's stories.
Wonderful work!!

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Wonderful!

Great plot! I could not stop reading and the twists had me screaming at the screen.
Dante is a wonderful character, I can't wait to read next book!
Uruloki... TOTAL NERDGASM!!! Tolkien rules!!!

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Amazing!

This is a great story, mature and likeable characters. I can't wait to read some more!!!

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Great book!

I loved the characters! Amelia is so brave and smart. It really annoys me when characters make stupid decisions, so this book was realy rewarding in that regard. Adults acting like adults!
The writing style is so nice, I loved how the landscape is described and the details are refreshing.
Awesome work!!

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